------------------------------------------------------------ Newsgroups: alt.startrek.vs.starwars Subject: LT.HIT-MAN's Fan Fic Showcase Review 4 From: "HIT-MAN" Date: Fri, 6 Aug 1999 15:20:58 -0400 Hi all it is a short review of some of the fan fics out there so relax and I'll get to your fan fic when I get to it LT.HIT-MAN'S Fan fic showcase review 4 LT.HIT-MAN finished his morning exercises namely using his black bladed light saber on Fed prisoners who he had armed with fully powered E-11's and six attack drones firing at full speed and fully powered blasters. After half an hour the fed prisoners where dead, they made a good go if trying to kill him lord knows he had giving them good reason to try and punch his ticket but they could not get anywhere near him as he force jumped, ducked and slashed with his light saber the drones lasted only a few seconds longer then the fed prisoners had only because they could fly. LT.HIT-MAN had the sever droids clean up the mess that was left after his work out LT.HIT-MAN had let the rest of the Fed prisoners watch some of them had cheered as the work out began but after the first six Fed prisoners where diced into steaming chunks of dead meat the rest of the Fed prisoners knew that there was no way that the remaining thirty prisoners that where " working out " with LT.HIT-MAN would have a snow ball's chance in hell of nailing him. " Well you all know what time it is right?" LT.HIT-MAN said to the remaining Fed prisoners who just grumbled " I CAN'T HEAR YOU!" LT.HIT-MAN said in a slightly pleasant voice, pleasant to him that is and th Fed prisoners yelled " It's time for LT.HIT-MAN'S fan fic showcase review." LT.HIT-MAN smiled that cold mocking smile that they all had come to hate with every once of there being " Well at lest your learning." LT.HIT-MAN said as he pulled out the remote and powered up the holo screen " First up is " Revenge&Loyalty The Commander "Enforcer" Yate's story." As you know "Enforcer" Yates was my CO when I was in the Cleaners. When LT.HIT-MAN made mention of the Cleaners the Fed prisoners had a mix of hate and grudging respect the Cleaners had no only whip the Federation's ass when the Empire came a calling on them but they had fought in every key battle when the Empire took out the Cardies, the Romulans the Klingons and Even the Borg could not withstand the rage of the Cleaners " Yes this is the life story of good old Yates a man I can respect and understand, you should read it while you still have the chance." LT.HIT-MAN started to look over the Fed prisoners " It get's a ten out of ten blaster bolts." LT.HIT-MAN allowed the ten " lucky" prisoners to say there goodbyes to families, friends lovers ect ect before he had them step on to a transporter that he had installed on the ship, no one but him knew about it after all when the Empire took control of the Galaxy the first thing they did was out-law transporters they are an abomination in the eyes of the Empire. LT.HIT-MAN activated the transporter controls and the ten Fed prisoners where ripped apart and reconstructed and what came back did not live for very long. After the sever droids finished cleaning off the transporter saw that the Fed prisoners where on the edge of a nervous brake down " Now you see why we have outlawed these hideous devices." " Next we're going to try something different." The Fed prisoners start to get restless some of them looked ready to charge LT.HIT-MAN but the two E-Webs that where tracking there every move put an end to that idea so they sat there waiting and praying for a quick death but they where not so lucky. " There are two fan fics that are really good the first one is " Where Angels fear to tread." by Jonathan Boyd and the next one is " Domination." by Baron Kenneth von Lowe these two fan fics are some of the best that I have seen in a long time I can not decide with of these two is the better so I'm going to let you decide which of the two is the better fan fic but I give both of them ten out of ten blaster bolts, I hope to see more of these fics. Twenty Fed prisoners where lead to a force field enclosed area much like a pit and there where seats along the edge of the pit where the Fed prisoners and the men of the Cleaners who had been sent aboard the Shattered Souls for hostile environment training on Tayvora 9 sat and watched as ten of the Fed prisoners where give red light sabers and the other ten where given blue light sabers. " It's time, time for the Duel of the Fan Fics." LT.HIT-MAN said to the Feds in the pit now FIGHT!" but things where not to happen as LT.HIT-MAN was hoping they would happen the Fed prisoners turned there light sabers on themselves and before LT.HIT-MAN or the men of the Cleaners could stop them they where all dead and so the debate of what fan fic, Where Angels Fear To Tread and Domination was better then the other would remain unresolved. LT.HIT-MAN was beside himself in fury and the men of the Cleaners knew that it was time to make themselves scares so they quickly and quietly exited stage right and light speed. The Fed prisoners where not so lucky. LT.HIT-MAN pulled out his black light saber as was about to massacre all of the Feds when a boy walked up to LT.HIT-MAN, everyone could see the hate in his eyes, LT.HIT-MAN had killed his friends and some of his family and he wanted revenge. " You ya you!." the boy said to LT.HIT-MAN who just looked down at him before rising his light sabre to cut the kid in two " I'm going to kick your ass." the boy snarled then he kicked LT.HIT-MAN right in the balls but LT.HIT-MAN's stromtrooper armor stopped the kid from doing any real harm but the kid's sudden and savage attack caused LT.HIT-MAN to stop in his tracks and the Boy saw an opportunity and jumped up and jammed his thumb into LT.HIT-MAN's human eye. LT.HIT-MAN could feel the boys hate as well as much force potential as he stopped himself from killing the child but when the boy tried to pop his eye his world exploded in a star burst of pain and his dropped his light saber as he staggered back and the boy snatched up his light saber. " No so tough with out your weapons are you?" the boy said in a venom filled voice as he was about to take a swing at LT.HIT-MAN's head with all of his hate and all of his rage. " You underestimate the power of the dark side!" LT.HIT-MAN snarled as he put the force choke hold on the boy, bring him to his knees but the boy tried to push on but he could not as his vision started to fade to black as his brain was starved of oxygen. For a few seconds no one moved or breathed, they where all to stunned but what had happened LT.HIT-MAN could feel the hand of fate was upon them all and what happened next could decide the fate of the galaxy. LT.HIT-MAN was shocked but the raw untrained force that was pouring off of the boy like the heat of a sun. " The force is strong in this boy." LT.HIT-MAN said in a low wispier as he eased back on the force choke hold, just enough so the child would not die but was unable to move " Lord Poe must be made aware of this child." LT.HIT-MAN though " His hate as made him strong, yes the sith would have a new dark apprentice." LT.HIT-MAN picked up his light saber and held to close to the boy's face " You shall be spared and so shall your family but I will not tolerate any more insolence from you." LT.HIT-MAN said to the boy his voice thick with fear inspiring menace and he raised his hands and start to send inky black lighting bolts into the boy. The Fed prisoners starts to shake with fear as the boy's anguished screams cut them to the bone like a knife. After a few seconds LT.HIT-MAN stopped the lighting that had highlight his hellish smile " You will come to know the true power of the dark side, your hate is misplace young one it is because of the rebels that we had to conquer this galaxy if they would have let the corrupt old republic die then we would have had peace in our galaxy and things would have been good but they had to try and rebuild the old republic and Q's interference was what had lead the Empire to your galaxy." LT.HIT-MAN told the child as he let go of the chock hold on him and started flooding the boy's mind with the dark power of the force as he told him that, the boy could feel his rage and hate growing and growing like wild fire and he looked at LT.HIT-MAN " I wish to know more." the boy said in a husky voice. LT.HIT-MAN smiled as he felt the boy's hate growing with in him like the seed of a poisonous plant " I will teach you the ways of the force and then I shall bring you before my master Lord Poe and he will complete your training." LT.HIT-MAN rumbled as he reached out his cyber hand to help the boy to his feet and when the boy took his hand he knew that the child was his and his master's. " What is your name boy?" LT.HIT-MAN asked the child who he was and the boy looked up at him and the look that he gave him made LT.HIT-MAN's smile grow " I am Spike Rush, my master." the child said as knelt before LT.HIT-MAN " Rise my young apprentice." LT.HIT-MAN said to Spike who got to his feet and silently followed LT.HIT-MAN who called for Sargent Trackus of the Cleaners. " Sargent Trackus you will take this boy's family and see to there needs." LT.HIT-MAN said grimly and Sargent Trackus was about to say something, he had lot a lot of good friends when the Fed's sabotaged the power plant of the base he was station at but LT.HIT-MAN put the double whammy on him, LT.HIT-MAN put the laser sight of his cyber eye in the middle of Trackus's forehead as well as the force choke hold, Spike Rush was smiling at this and LT.HIT-MAN could feel the savage joy in the boy's heart " I will hold you personally responsible for the well being of this boy's family if anything soul happen to them I'll be very annoyed with you do you understand me?" LT.HIT-MAN asked Trackus who could only nod his heads as his life ran out on him. " Good do not fail me, I am not as forgiving as January is." LT.HIT-MAN snarled as he let go of the choke hold and let the boy away. Trackus managed to regain his cool and had Spike's family lead to better quarters after he had private Namlouses take the Fed prisoners back to there cells. LT.HIT-MAN knelt on the Holo-Net sender and with in a few seconds the dark hooded visage of Wane Poe was hovering about him " Why have you called me my good LT.HIT-MAN" Poe asked and LT.HIT-MAN raised his bowed head as he pointed to Spike Rush who was kneeling as well " I have found this boy, the force is strong in him and I wish to train him until I return my master." Poe looked at Spike Rush and started to probe the boy's mind with the force as was pleasantly surprised by the amount resistance the boy was putting out to his mind probe. " You may train the boy my faithful LT. then when you return you will bring him before me." Poe said to LT.HIT-MAN " It shall be done my master." LT.HIT-MAN replied, secretly he was over joyed at this. As they shattered Soul was making it's way to Tayvora 9 LT.HIT-MAN and started Spike's training and Spike became like a son to him and he loved the and nurtured Spike as he would have done for his unborn son that the rebel scum had killed all those long years ago and his wife Captain Dalaa came to love Spike as if he was her son as well. END